mizz-iceberg

Hey there! Interesting Poem. However, I feel the emotions and ideas are too scattered in this poem. It's almost confusing. Work out your ideas and think about what is it ...

The Worst books I've read are: Goose Chase by Patrice Kindl Raven Quest by Sharon Stewart I read Goose Chase till the end, because it WAS engaging. When I finally ...

Hey there Via! Your story is very well written however I must ask how much you researched for this topic. I have attended majalis's (mourning) and matham since I have ...

Aloha! Interesting story. It sort of reminds me of Casper and Wendy. =) There are a few grammar/punctuation mistakes. At first I couldn't pinpoint exactly what was wrong in this ...

Hello there! New member, I see. Great to see you. Alright to the review then: “I can’t…I wish…I’m sorry.” He can’t think of what to say. She stares at him ...

Nice poem! It has a nice rhythm and flows well. Kudos for that. This was my favourite part : The Sun is not there, The Moon won't shine. Nobody is ...

I loved it! I thought it was one of the best books I've ever read. Call me a crack pot if you want but I love classics. It was truly ...

I can see this comes from the heart. Yes I agree this is a sweet poem. The Nitpicks: For i did not die I am the moon that lights up ...

I liked it! I agree with Samsal, it's not very strong but I enjoyed reading it. The reason I think I like it is because I can relate to it. ...

Hello there!! I see OverEasy has pretty much summed up what I wanted to say. However I have to say you have a good base to this and great ideas ...

Hey there Bunnie!! You have a good beginning for what seems to be an interesting story. The thing is, it's overall well written and interesting but it didn't get me ...

Aha! So I'm the first to review this poem. The imagery was spectacular and created an overall effective mood. The words flowed well, so overall I think it was a ...

Hmm... this was an interesting poem. But unfortunately it didn't really make me care. It was to vague. As a reader, I need more enthralling emotions. You need write it ...

Aww this was such a cute and satisfying piece. Very well written! He let the light moment grow serious when words were scarce. “I…I want you to remember me, okay? ...

Hello! I loved this and didn't any striking problem with it. Few Nitpicks: The control room was buzzing with activity as the large collection of scientists worked at their computers. ...