mistielovesyou

Listen, this is a very nice story with a nice context, but that's it. It's just nice. You used far too many details in the beggining which prove to be ...

This is very good writing, and i like it. Though it is very vague. I loved it but it would just a tiny bit better if you tried to incorporate ...

I know you were trying to make a point here, but it wasn't good. Perhaps you could write a story in a different way, and include just dialogue? I don't ...

That was awesome. I really liked your approach on death, and how you made it seem more "happy" than most. I'm not a nitpicky person, so I didn't see any ...

Wow, this is pretty awesome. I actually laughed a little (and it is rare that I ever laugh during a comedic story, even one that others crack up at). I ...

This is good, but I have a few suggestions (of course): Firstly, lose the bolded writing. Good writing doesn't need bolded words to convey a feeling or point. Trust me, ...

I really liked you idea, but I think your execution was a little bland (IMHO). Maybe it was the way you described the story, but it needs a little more ...