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Re: memorizer part I
hi dear! i am so glad that u did a detailed review of my story as it is my first one. i will try to pay attention to them in ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: memorizer part I
really really thank you for helping me
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: memorizer part I
Im kinda busy these days and i cant find time for reviewing and get points.if u really like to read the rest sooner u can donate me 420 points dear ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: memorizer part I
hi dear kelpies i should thank you a lot as you are the first one to make a review for my first work in so glad that u chose my ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: Death has arrived
i think it is enough.u know it is even good in this phase and it really transmits the message and feeling. but if u want to make it a longer ...
Sep 19, 2014 -
Re: Death has arrived
the first thing i can say about this text is that it is short but it really makes the reader feel the thing that the writer feels.i mean something like ...
Sep 19, 2014
