mintantlers

Hi guys! I hope you liked it, thanks for the feedback. It's really helpful but then again I'm not that great at grammar to sorry! I'll try my best though! ...

Hey guys! On my other works I'll try and brush up on my description, plot, characters, and grammar! Please read and review my other works! Thanks!

Really great description in there, I loved you sensory details and how you really went in and started talking about everything. Great job! Good luck on your next story starters!

Hi, I liked your story, it was pretty good. But I think that you should fix the spacing of the story. It looks like a giant mass of words and ...