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i really liked this piece but i am not exactly sure what it is about. At first i thought it was about how you felt when you were ill or ...

I think this is really good and the like the part at the end where its almost as if Jo realises that her mother didn't plan her and that she ...

I usually don't like poetry but i feel that what you have wriiten is amazin..... its exactly how i feel sometimes so i can relkate to it well. But i ...

I think its really good and i would love to find out what happens next but, to be honest, i am kinda confused. :? Otherwise i think its really good, ...

I think that it's amazing and i felt almost disappointed when it ended. I loved the amount of imagery in the piece and i feel that this is what really ...