mikepyro

God forbid a published novel be better than an unpublished short story. Sorry you don't like the name Bob.

Hate to sound mean but your example of depth has been done 1000 times before in every emo poem ever written. Please don't confuse subtlety and sparse description with a ...

Hate to sound mean but your example of depth has been done 1000 times before in every loss poem ever written. Please don't confuse subtlety and sparse description with a ...

This is what happens when you skip four chapters each review. Don't act confused when you put no effort into processing the story.

Thanks guys. Had as much fun writing this thing as y'all did reading it hopefully. Was so much fun and oddly it was pretty easy once I got into the ...

Thanks you two, glad you enjoyed it

Thanks confetti, appreciate the small tips. And glad you enjoyed it.

And some people complained about awesome story getting featured...lol Kidding. It's simple and worth a smile. Not really worth a review, honestly can't say anything else. So...yeah, sorry about you ...

that's great, so what did you think of the rest of the story? You know, beyond the first paragraph...

Thanks for the epic review josh, and everyone else. So glad ya'll have enjoyed the work so far! :]

Thank you but your story is not my story and you need to review my work based on its qualities and failings, not your works.

Id forgotten how much I loved your humor in the almost 2 years I've been away. Simple, sweet, and deliciously silly. It's hard to make flash fiction comedy really work ...

Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it. And thanks to all my readers for your support and reviews. :D

All good and well, but a piece should stand on it's own. Which this does though. Good luck on the novel. I finished mine a couple months back and have ...

There's six f words in the entire 12 page story, not one every other paragraph. Your reviews are seen by everyone who reads my piece and I don't want false ...