mikedb1492

Thanks for the reviews. I took what you said and I think fixed it all. I did my best to get rid of the info dumps, and I changed the ...

Thanks guys. I told my friends about this idea a while ago and they thought it was the dumbest thing they'd ever heard, but still funny. Then when I told ...

It was pretty well written, and I found it very interesting. The only problem was that there were letters missing or added to words at least 4 times. It might ...

Is this going to be like the movie Red Dawn? Where Russia invades us, gets rid of the parents, and then the kids are the only ones left to fight? ...

It didn't get me completely interested, but there was a bit of a magical feeling as I read it. My favorite part, though, was when she opened up the box, ...

Here's the second half. They continued to follow the river for another half hour. Higai was getting more and more impatient, his fingers rubbing the amulet rapidly. Gabriel knew he’d ...

Ya, I'm pretty hooked too. I will admit it was an information dump, but I thought it was pretty cool. Personally I think this sounds like it would be an ...