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I'm meant to be reading it on English for corse work or something and miss said she pocked the book cause it was simple and my class is thick. She ...

Hi emmylou1995 I like it. Its short and sweet and moving. midnightread :elephant:

Hi Black Thought I like this post a lot so I'm going to read the next part and do the review there. midnightread :elephant:

I like the sound of these books, I'm going to have to find them somewhere.

I like it and I guess that the mc shot themselves instead of the dad. I like the jackets and the way that the mc is a bit rude to ...

I LOVE IT. I absolutely love it. It was so funny, I almost died of laughter. :elephant:

Hi nativecatcher I really like this prologue as it paints a really good picture of what is happening for the reader. midnightread :elephant:

Hi TheNewHero I really like this. Its almost as good as the real thing. I haven't got any nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:

Hi Ledge, I really like it. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. Can PM me when you post more? midnightread :elephant:

Hi darkwriter15 I really like the story, but I want to know why the mc is going to die. I haven't got any nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:

Hi Izadazzled I liked it but I didn't see any capital I's or apostrophes but other than that it was good. :elephant:

Thanks living_is_for_life It was supposed to be Land Rover and I've never been very good at possessives. Thanks for the improvements and I'm not taking it badly since I did ...

I think that that chapter is brilliant and I love it. I think the way you introduce Tanner was clever. I can't wait to read the rest of it. :elephant: