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Hi lunahlove I can't say I like the end but it's your book so you decide what you write I guess. I like the way that Hero and Leander almost ...

Right, favourite books. I have so many cause I'm a reading machine (no really I am). My favourite favourites would have to be 1. Belgarion by David Eddings (you've probably ...

Hi tam_ara I like this. Even though there seem to be loads of vampire books at the moment this is different form the rest so its a pleasant change. I ...

Hi Currer First of welcome to yws. I love the way that this is about Renesmee, but I thought she could only put her thoughts into someones else head not ...

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx I like the title by the way. I love this sentence I didn’t like this place. I couldn’t stand the putrid stench of it; musty and dank. It ...

Hi TheNewHero Here to review some more of this brill story. I love the way that you have made your main character hungry at a funeral, its just something that ...

Hi lunahlove I love this story. In this chapter I love the way that the days are being counted down until she has to get Hero. I didn't see any ...

Hi Stori Is this the next bit of the story or is it a bit from later on? I only ask this as it doesn't fit the last part. I ...

Hi lunahlove Thanks for the pm. I love this sentence They ate dinner ad although the conversation didn’t flow like a water fall, it managed to trickle just enough to ...

Hi lunahlove Thanks for the pm. I'll read the rest of the story later and do separate reviews for each of them. Now, down to business. I like the way ...

You could try the Skulduggery Pleasant series. They might not be your thing but you might enjoy them. I'm currently re-reading them cause I enjoyed them so much. :elephant:

Hi RedRaven I think this is to short to be a chapter. I think that you should make it longer, maybe by describing everything a bit more or something like ...

Hi RedRaven I like this. Its short and sweet and shows that the character is giving up. I think I'm going to go and read chapter one for this. midnightread ...

Hi lunahlove I love this paragraph Iris took a moment to respond, puckering her lips in a mirror. Her hair, a light blond color today, crackled with intensity. Sometime in ...

Hi lunahlove I really like this but there a couple of mistakes. I'd advise re-reading it and possible putting a rating on it cause of the language. I think I'm ...