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Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx The landscape had become more hilly since the last day or so I get this bit but it is a bit confusing in the way that you have ...

Hi Aquareed I like this. I think that you need to re-read it because there awere some missing letters and stuff like that. I like the way that you write ...

Hi Auareed I like this, its intresting and the reader gets hooked striaght away. I want to know why the character isn't sharing something with her best friend and what ...

Hi laightplusdark Cool name and welcome to yws. I like the title of this story. Right, the nit-picks, Flash back should be in italics to make it stand out same ...

I love these books. The last ones just come out and it brilliant. Te whole series is about a boy called James whos Mum dies and he goes into a ...

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx Thanks for the pm, you we're right, I do really enjoy this story. I think that you're writing style is brilliant. I like the way that the mc ...

Hi stupidiot92 Like the name by the way. I like this. I think the way that you write is good and it is gripping, I can't wait to read what ...

Hi ledge I like this. I love the way that you are gradually going through Lila's life. The bit I like most in this chapter is when Lila meets the ...

Hi firefly882, I really like this and I can't wait to read more. I can't wait to find out more about Paragon and what is happening to her. There aren't ...

Hi kingolions I like the title, it caught my attention quickly. I like the way that you started the story it gave a really good picture of what was happening. ...

I love it. Normally poetry bores me to death but then normally there dull and boring. This was really funny and it was absolutely brilliant. :elephant:

Hi NaRachel I like this but I think that the chapters should be longer. I haven't got any nit-picks. I love the way that you wrote the last paragraph, it ...

Hi Aristotle I love the beginning of this story. I can't wait to read more so I can find out what neural-transmogrification is. I didn't see any mistakes so I ...

Hi Aristotle I like this prologue, its short, sweet and to the point. I'm going to read the rest as soon as I can be bothered. midnightread :elephant:

Hi BarrettBenedict I like this. The way that you write makes me feel as if I'm there cause its so good and descriptive. I like the way that he is ...