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Re: Break-Up.
That was great. Witty, captivating, blunt yet fluid...I love the colloquial-ness of it. (Is that a word?) Some people actually go overboard with it, making the story drastically informal and ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Pandora's Box
I love it! Obviously, there is very little revealed in the plot, but I like that. The mystery of it all intrigues me. I just wrote a detailed critique but ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Someone to shoot the stars with me
I adore this! It's so cute, AND well-written. Just one error: 'Cause you're hand fits mine so snugly -> 'Cause YOUR hand fits mine so snugly. A minor typo there. ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Stand In Rain (Lost in Life)
I'd take the edits from some of the other reviewers seriously. They make the song flow so much better. Overall, these lyrics were all right. With a solid melody, it ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to the Desert of the Real
Very well done! You criticize this generation's vices very well. The word choice is superb, and it cuts straight to the point with vivid imagery. I love it! All the ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: The Magician
First of all, very good imagery and interesting topic! It's rather unique, and you capture the magician's surroundings rather well. Second of all, i saw a couple typos here and ...
Jun 3, 2008
