mercipourlevenin

That was great. Witty, captivating, blunt yet fluid...I love the colloquial-ness of it. (Is that a word?) Some people actually go overboard with it, making the story drastically informal and ...

I love it! Obviously, there is very little revealed in the plot, but I like that. The mystery of it all intrigues me. I just wrote a detailed critique but ...

I adore this! It's so cute, AND well-written. Just one error: 'Cause you're hand fits mine so snugly -> 'Cause YOUR hand fits mine so snugly. A minor typo there. ...

I'd take the edits from some of the other reviewers seriously. They make the song flow so much better. Overall, these lyrics were all right. With a solid melody, it ...

Very well done! You criticize this generation's vices very well. The word choice is superb, and it cuts straight to the point with vivid imagery. I love it! All the ...

First of all, very good imagery and interesting topic! It's rather unique, and you capture the magician's surroundings rather well. Second of all, i saw a couple typos here and ...