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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mangoes and Strawberries

    Thank you!

    May 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mangoes and Strawberries

    Thank you!

    May 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mangoes and Strawberries

    Thank you for the reviews... P.S. The last paragraph was real while the first one is a short story...I'll remember it next time....

    May 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mangoes and Strawberries

    Thank you for reviewing. It the first time I wrote here and I haven't proofread it. Thank you...

    May 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Picture of My Cousin

    Hi Tomorrow786! I really liked how you used adjectives that makes me imagine I was really there! It really flowing and smooth. But what I don't understand is that, is ...

    Apr 28, 2013


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