melvinbanggollay

From my wordpress=================== I dreamed of a thousand nights and just one day. I wonder what took you so far, far away. ( I wondered ...) But you’re not here, ...

Honestly, you have such powerful display of wit in what you have written. I find no fault as to gramatical composition for I was not good at this. I am ...

I dreamed a dream and waves crashed = " that waves crashed " against the dark rocks. Foam glittered and landed on my cheek so cold. I saw a creature ...

Infinite bite and trialed fights, " Infinite bite and trialled fights " bayonettes not short from sight. " bayonnetes .... The sky bleached red like the fiery pitts of hell. ...

The Memory Haven Its strange how many things = " Its stranged. ... Remind me of you. = " reminded me of you " Especially inside the Memory Haven. The ...

Generally, this piece is great write with a superficial display of wit in every line but let me suggest some minor changes. Keep writing more poetry i know you have ...