melkor

Hahahahaaaaa!!!!At last, bloodshed and pretty description! -Pardon me, but the last five reviews or so i've done just now were about as painful as stabbing your own eyes with a ...

Righto...Let's keep this short... I'll make five points.. JUST FIVE!! (a nd please note, I'm not one for grammar suggestions, being terrible at it myself:P) While you, can read, and ...

Hmmmmm....... -thinks for a long time about this 'un- Well... Let me be honest.. As poetry, I don't like it. Thats not very elaborate is it? But at least I ...

As this is real short, I'll not be overly elaborate. Hmm....this was slightly sad, if there had been more of it, then i would have felt incredibly bad for this ...

1. Readability - How easy your story is to read. A good story will obviously be much easier to read than a bad one. Flow of words 2/3 Rather nicely ...

Okay..I'll review this as I go along reading... From the first part, down to 'all was taken in silence.' Mistakes so far -shudders should be shutters- -Will- should be we'll- ...

1. Readability - How easy your story is to read. A good story will obviously be much easier to read than a bad one. Flow of words 2/3 Thoughts conveyed ...

1. Readability - How easy your story is to read. A good story will obviously be much easier to read than a bad one. Flow of words 2/3 Thoughts conveyed ...

Oh my boys kissing! I condemn thee to the bowels of hell! Just kidding, I'm a pretty open guy, it ain't my thing, it was weird reading it, but the ...

Yes this is quite pretty poem. It makes me sad though, I know too many people like that, we all fear being old and alone, don't we? Just don't post ...

Ahh, the tyranny of anorexia, nice idea. You had a perfect rythmn I have to say, nice and fat, I should say. :D the whole thing fits so perfectly. I ...

I loved it. 'The wolves slow their song, Three – four to four – four to Eight – eight, and the frost stops whispering. ' Best line ever. I think ...

Ahh yes I got the typo, thats the only one I think. Overall I enjoyed the fact that you made a poem from a quote, a nice idea. It's clear ...

Well I have finally ddi as I said I would! To be honest, it's nothing short of fantastic! I'm very interesting in humanities war and 'going over the top' is ...

Well I'm going to try to be as critical as possible because I guess that's the point. :D before I do big bad wolf, I'd like to point out that ...