megsug

Nevermind to my reply on my review. I got it to work. :)

My edit button is not working. I apologize for the quotes within the quotes.

See, all of those answers need to go into your chapter, so that the reader knows what you're talking about. In a normal situation, you would not get the chance ...

Grr... I keep forgetting to press the yes button.

Now we can edit. Mwahahahaha! Ignore previous comment.

...Oh crap. I just saw Kafka's and didn't even look at the others. Sorry for any repeats.

Realized I forgot to erase a part of your story at the top... Oops. Ignore the unquoted paragraphs at the top.

YWS is a bit funny with paragraphs. I would suggest having a 'YWS copy' where every tab for a paragraph is two enters so a blank line is inbetween each ...

Thank you for this. I was wondering about how in depth I needed to go with the storyline, so this eases my mind and my word count. :)

Thank you. I find your tangents fascinating. However, I did have a word limit and a prompt. Exploring the tangents would be getting off topic. It is something to think ...

Okay. I wish I had a handy delete button. That was small of me. I apologize. Thank you for the advice.

...Wow. Thank you... er... I guess. I did read over it. There were a things that I wasn't sure about. I do a lot of second guessing of myself, so ...

Thank you for your review. I wrote this in a hurry to get it submitted in time for Review day. I'm not surprised the dialogue is confusing. I was actually ...