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Me again~ I'm just going to dive in, see what I can see, and tell you what I loved at the end. "Help me, my companion has disappeared and the ...

Hey Jumpy! You requested a review from me a while ago, and I'm going to make it up to you by reviewing both parts of your short story instead of ...

He's dead, the hunters found him He couldn't have just returned to the banished because...? That old woman would be in the seemingly neverending graveyard, but I don't know where ...

Hey again, Jazzy! We've got some pretty good development working here. I'm going to dive in. But when we do, you don't have the right to put on such an ...

Here again~ Nice! We've got some history and explanation. Very exciting! I'm going to go ahead and dive in. That was over a hundred years ago, since then the war ...

Hey Jazzy! Because I made you wait so long, I'm going to review the whole shebang because, really, I need to make it up to you somehow xP I did ...

Hey! Finally here as requested. So sorry for the wait. That ending though! So good. Okeydokey... You've done a really good job with this so far. I'm really impressed with ...

Hey Aurora! Phew, AF covered a lot. I'll see what I can add. Okay, first, you have some really tiny details in your writing, and it's so intriguing when I ...

Hey Aurora! You asked for this so long ago, and I'm so sorry that I didn't get it to you sooner. Alright, you set the mood fantastically in the dream. ...

Hey EscaSkye! This was quite a moving ending. I want to get a small nitpick out of the way. A memory of a brother, a friend, a son, and a ...

Hey EscaSkye~ Sorry for the wait. I'm just going to go ahead and jump in. I apologize in advance if I repeat any of the other reviewers. I think you ...

Hey, Deanie~ It's lovely to come back to this. A few nitpicks that I don't think anyone picked up. It's hard to remember all of them, so forgive me if ...

Hey Deanie! Okay, on this review, I'm going to focus on your stream of consciousness style. Stream of consciousness is an attempt to replicate the thought process on paper which ...

I'm back~ Oh my goodness that was the best thing ever. This was definitely my favorite. How intense was that with Ben, and I loved it. Ah... Because of this, ...

Hey~ With my geology lab stuff done, I can move on to you. Ooh. How fantastic. I disagree with Utopia. I think your language is perfect for children. Even if ...