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Re: Ascension Chapter 10- The Butterfly Effect
Here for the last haul! I'm embarrassed for how long this has taken me. This chapter seems to be a bit of a challenge, but I'll take it on. I've ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 9- The Red Bird
Hey beans! It's been a really long haul, but I'm actually going to catch up! As always, I skimmed through the other reviews, so I shouldn't repeat anything. Wow. This ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 8- Ascension Dreams
Hey beans~ Gavin is probably the best thing ever. However, even though this chapter brought us Gavin, I feel like it's basically a throw away chapter. A large majority seems ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 7- La Chevalier
Hey beans~ There are a lot of new names and characters to know. I'm really interested in this queen figure though. She seems pretty awesome but also mysterious. Most of ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 6- Hustle Bones
Hey beans~ This chapter is solid. It's not mind blowing, but it's pretty good. The focus on colors was interesting though I didn't really catch the meaning. Perhaps as a ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 5- Tyr
Hey beans~ Snap! Things be getting serious up in here! This is probably my favorite chapter so far. The tiny bits of scenes are really effective with all of the ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 4- Muzzle Flash Reverie
Hey beans~ Mara is even cooler than I thought she was going to be when we first met her. Her arm is pretty neat. Alright... the mayor's death is... pretty ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 3- Premonitions Part 2 of 2
Alright. School has stolen my soul, but I'm here to continue reviewing. Wow! A lot was made clear this chapter. That's really exciting! You got a lot of back story ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Kai: Chapter 1
Heyo, Kimbo~ Your piece was my first break from exam things :D What a refreshing break it was too. We get hit with a lot of angst and drama all ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 3- Premonitions Part 1 of 2
Hey beans! I know you're probably shocked that I've finally returned. I've skimmed over the other two reviews, and I'll try not to repeat anything. Ooh. I like the world ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Spring Goddess
Hey, Saw your call for help in my people's tab and thought I would try to answer. The imagery in this is beautiful. I especially like lines 6-9 of the ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
Okeydoke. I'm going to try to leave a review for this. It's got so many heavy reviews, I don't know if I'll be able to leave anything of worth. We'll ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Candyland Chapter 3
The last chapter o.o Alright, I'm here to knock this out and get caught up. I skimmed through the other reviews. If I repeat anything, I'm sorry. Oh! That was ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: CandyLand Chapter 2
Hey Poseidon. I'm starting to get caught up! I skimmed through the other reviews, but I might repeat something. Sorry if I do. I'm really excited about getting farther into ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 6
Hey Chrissy! I'm caught up~ Did you remove the first few chapters? I can't seem to find them. Again, I skimmed through the other reviews. Sorry if I repeat anything~ ...
Mar 10, 2015
