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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension Chapter 10- The Butterfly Effect

    Here for the last haul! I'm embarrassed for how long this has taken me. This chapter seems to be a bit of a challenge, but I'll take it on. I've ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Ascension Chapter 9- The Red Bird

    Hey beans! It's been a really long haul, but I'm actually going to catch up! As always, I skimmed through the other reviews, so I shouldn't repeat anything. Wow. This ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ascension Chapter 8- Ascension Dreams

    Hey beans~ Gavin is probably the best thing ever. However, even though this chapter brought us Gavin, I feel like it's basically a throw away chapter. A large majority seems ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Politics Re: Ascension Chapter 7- La Chevalier

    Hey beans~ There are a lot of new names and characters to know. I'm really interested in this queen figure though. She seems pretty awesome but also mysterious. Most of ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Ascension Chapter 6- Hustle Bones

    Hey beans~ This chapter is solid. It's not mind blowing, but it's pretty good. The focus on colors was interesting though I didn't really catch the meaning. Perhaps as a ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ascension Chapter 5- Tyr

    Hey beans~ Snap! Things be getting serious up in here! This is probably my favorite chapter so far. The tiny bits of scenes are really effective with all of the ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ascension Chapter 4- Muzzle Flash Reverie

    Hey beans~ Mara is even cooler than I thought she was going to be when we first met her. Her arm is pretty neat. Alright... the mayor's death is... pretty ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ascension Chapter 3- Premonitions Part 2 of 2

    Alright. School has stolen my soul, but I'm here to continue reviewing. Wow! A lot was made clear this chapter. That's really exciting! You got a lot of back story ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Kai: Chapter 1

    Heyo, Kimbo~ Your piece was my first break from exam things :D What a refreshing break it was too. We get hit with a lot of angst and drama all ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ascension Chapter 3- Premonitions Part 1 of 2

    Hey beans! I know you're probably shocked that I've finally returned. I've skimmed over the other two reviews, and I'll try not to repeat anything. Ooh. I like the world ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Spring Goddess

    Hey, Saw your call for help in my people's tab and thought I would try to answer. The imagery in this is beautiful. I especially like lines 6-9 of the ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)

    Okeydoke. I'm going to try to leave a review for this. It's got so many heavy reviews, I don't know if I'll be able to leave anything of worth. We'll ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Candyland Chapter 3

    The last chapter o.o Alright, I'm here to knock this out and get caught up. I skimmed through the other reviews. If I repeat anything, I'm sorry. Oh! That was ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: CandyLand Chapter 2

    Hey Poseidon. I'm starting to get caught up! I skimmed through the other reviews, but I might repeat something. Sorry if I do. I'm really excited about getting farther into ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Phoenix Inferno 6

    Hey Chrissy! I'm caught up~ Did you remove the first few chapters? I can't seem to find them. Again, I skimmed through the other reviews. Sorry if I repeat anything~ ...

    Mar 10, 2015


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy