megsug

Hey, I felt like the relationships developed really quick. Suddenly she's friends with Noel. Suddenly she has a crush. It didn't seem very real to me. You don't talk to ...

Okay... I feel like this could be something so make it so. He says that he's new and then repeats it. You might want to change that. It's kinda weird. ...

I could only find one mistake so I'm going to nitpick. [/quote]As I sat up, it took me some time to register that it was so late at night. Or ...

This could have been a lot and it wasn't really anything. This reminded me of a poem called "The Highwayman." If you look that poem up and read it you'll ...

Hey, Interesting topic but you have a lot of typos. I'm not going to point any out but if you read over it again you'll find that words are missing ...

I think Mark's dialogue was overly excited in a way that was almost annoying. I saw no real reason for it though I did like the character. Keep him friendly ...

I really liked this poem. To me it sounded like it was given from the point of a lonely/insane person. The only thing I could ask for is a better ...