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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nightling's Necklace, Chapter One

    Here to review as I said I would a few hours ago. May I say, I skimmed over the other reviewer's review and you did a great job changing your ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 7

    Before I say hi, I want to tell you that I feel awful because I've been on a reviewing kick for the first time since forever and completely forgot about ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper Prologue

    Hey, Thanks again for that review gave me on my contest piece. I love prolouges for whatever reason. I start with them for most of my novels. We definitely get ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hey there Delilah

    Hey, I don't think it's so bad really. You're just being hard on yourself. I liked the different look on the song and voicing. I know you probably don't care ...

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 6

    Hey, Remember me? I apologize for my horrendous display of procrastination and busyiness. I've finally got around to your chapter. Well, this little short chapter should have been read long ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [Post Deleted]

    Hey, You're theme was challenging, and you were very true to it. I liked your character though he's insane and out of it. Your portrayal of a disturbed soldier's way ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' story - Chapter 5

    Hey, Great fifth chapter. Okay, I'm going to throw you a curve ball. As a reviewer, I'm more into the "Here are the small things that you should fix" because ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 4

    Hey, You post chapters really fast, and I might be annoying you, practically stalking your novel, but I need something to review, and I'm interested in your novel. So... On ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapters 2 & 3

    Hey, This set of chapters was my favorite so far. Layers are being added, making this more intruiging and such. With my novel, I hit a block with reviewers around ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 1

    Hey, I got around to your first chapter. I'm a little confused, but I'm not and... yeah. It's interesting. You just have a lot of characters that you've introduced. Sometimes ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Paint (Chapter 2)

    Hey, Thanks for the request. The plot is growing thicker. Did I just think that to my alarm clock? To should be of. The Looney bin’s calling. They have a ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story

    Hey, I'm here to review as requested. I'll get to the next part as soon as I can. I'm sharing a computer with a computer geek family at the moment, ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [Post Deleted]

    I really want to cry inside. This was terrific. This will be the second peice of yours I have read, and I bow down to you. The feeling here is ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Paint (Chapter 1)

    Hey, Thanks for the request. I had practically forgotten about my thread. Thanks for reviving it. I'm just going to jump into the review part and let you know my ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Beggar and the Star

    Hey, I love fairytales, so I was estatic when I found this. I don't mind the repitition or the flowery language as it fits with the voicing of the story. ...

    Apr 27, 2011


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold