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Re: Nightling's Necklace, Chapter One
Here to review as I said I would a few hours ago. May I say, I skimmed over the other reviewer's review and you did a great job changing your ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 7
Before I say hi, I want to tell you that I feel awful because I've been on a reviewing kick for the first time since forever and completely forgot about ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Keeper Prologue
Hey, Thanks again for that review gave me on my contest piece. I love prolouges for whatever reason. I start with them for most of my novels. We definitely get ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Hey there Delilah
Hey, I don't think it's so bad really. You're just being hard on yourself. I liked the different look on the song and voicing. I know you probably don't care ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 6
Hey, Remember me? I apologize for my horrendous display of procrastination and busyiness. I've finally got around to your chapter. Well, this little short chapter should have been read long ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Hey, You're theme was challenging, and you were very true to it. I liked your character though he's insane and out of it. Your portrayal of a disturbed soldier's way ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' story - Chapter 5
Hey, Great fifth chapter. Okay, I'm going to throw you a curve ball. As a reviewer, I'm more into the "Here are the small things that you should fix" because ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 4
Hey, You post chapters really fast, and I might be annoying you, practically stalking your novel, but I need something to review, and I'm interested in your novel. So... On ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapters 2 & 3
Hey, This set of chapters was my favorite so far. Layers are being added, making this more intruiging and such. With my novel, I hit a block with reviewers around ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 1
Hey, I got around to your first chapter. I'm a little confused, but I'm not and... yeah. It's interesting. You just have a lot of characters that you've introduced. Sometimes ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Paint (Chapter 2)
Hey, Thanks for the request. The plot is growing thicker. Did I just think that to my alarm clock? To should be of. The Looney bin’s calling. They have a ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story
Hey, I'm here to review as requested. I'll get to the next part as soon as I can. I'm sharing a computer with a computer geek family at the moment, ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
I really want to cry inside. This was terrific. This will be the second peice of yours I have read, and I bow down to you. The feeling here is ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Paint (Chapter 1)
Hey, Thanks for the request. I had practically forgotten about my thread. Thanks for reviving it. I'm just going to jump into the review part and let you know my ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: The Beggar and the Star
Hey, I love fairytales, so I was estatic when I found this. I don't mind the repitition or the flowery language as it fits with the voicing of the story. ...
Apr 27, 2011
