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Hey Host~ Here as requested. Very nice message you have here. I feel like you pulled it off well too. the hood made him feel more safe r He pulled ...

Hello Pompadour~ Here as requested. At this moment your work is featured. Congratulations! You have a lot of reviews, so I don't know how long this is going to be, ...

Hello~ This was quite lovely. Even though Cadogan is quite the jerkface, I kind of like him in all of his jerkfacedness. So, that first bit is almost all dialogue. ...

Hey Twit~ Here to review as requested! I'm really excited to read this :3 I'll just dive right in. That night, I dream of bad things. Just like I always ...

Hey, Ravenboy Here as requested~ Very nice start we have here. A cliff hanger to end, I see. Always a good tactic~ I'm just going to dive in. It was ...

Hey~ Here as requested. This was very enjoyable. No lie, the other day, I thought about how I would like to read a story about the servant side of manors, ...

Hey! Here one more time. I wonder why this wasn't in the green room... Really, I think you could have included this in your other chapter and saved the points. ...

Hi~ Here once again, as asked. :3 You've gotten a lot of help grammatically in your first chapter and here. I wanted to tell him about the ghost thing He ...

Eeeks. Late reply. I'm assuming you didn't get my PM, but that's alright. I'll knock this out. ;) So... Like HighTop, this isn't my usual humor, but I did see ...

Hello Storybrainiac~ Here as requested! Hightop pointed out that you switch tenses a lot, but I just wanted to show you how many times with your first paragraph. Present/future tense ...

Hey! I know I reviewed your second part first, but I'm here again~ Multiple personalities. Very cool! I'm just going to jump in again. Of course you’d still be here ...

Hey Braydog~ I haven't read chapter 1 yet, so I apologize if I say anything way off mark. Why the hell is are there shiny lights out the front of ...

Hey native~ I'm just going to jump in~ Aw. Johnny-boy is such a cute nickname. -If the deaf girl can function just as a hearing person can, I'm not sure ...

Hey there, rikkidas~ I've reviewed one of your chapters, but I don't think it's the most recent, so forgive me if I get confused. One of the guards said that ...

Hey~ Here to bother you one more time ;) Before I start, let me say, be confident! All we want to do is help. :) Everyone has a chapter that ...