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Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.3
I'm not stalking you. o.o Hey! I just happened to see that you posted this, so I thought I'd stop by :3 Ahem... Just so you know, favorite part yet... ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Paralleled-[chapter two]
Oh boy, it's been an entire month and more since you mentioned me in your comment about this chapter. I've been a little busy and stuff >.> But here I ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Reprisal
Hey Mirfain, Here as requested~ I skimmed through Magenta's review, but forgive me if I missed something and repeat it. I'm going to jump in with some critiques, but I ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: The Good Life - Chapter Two: Resistance is for Losers
Hey again~ Here as requested. You're blessed with such good reviewers. We'll see what I can add... Just a side note and not criticizing at all, the reason it might ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: The Good Life - Chapter One: Losing It
Hey lakegirls, Here as requested. You have a lot of really good reviews! I hope I'll be able to give you something helpful... I read through the previous reviews, but ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.2
Yo~ Just jumping in this time. Three days later, we had news of my discharge Eeeeh... Whenever a loved one of mine has been in the hospital, we haven't known ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.1
I finally got here! I know I said I would get here yesterday about a week ago, but I'm here now which is what really matters. It's totally official. Michael ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 1.3
I'll just knock chapter one out of the park tonight... Hey! Here to bother you once again... Oops... I see Iggy also talked about the imagery... Oh well. Another emotional ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Oh! You're posting a novel... How interesting... Hi. :3 How bizarre this was... Definitely in a good way. I'll just go on with what I saw which wasn't much, to ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 1.2
Hey~ I also thought Parker was a boy, in case you were taking a poll ;) green tea frappe :O Such things exist? I'm not sure whether to be intrigued ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 1.1
Hey Isha~ Here as requested! The other reviewers didn't find many nitpicks... I'll see what I can do~ So... I couldn't find much of anything either. There were a few ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Aria~ You have stuff! And I'll read it. :3 I feel like I recognize these names, but if I ask about it I'll just be saying, "Is that this thing ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Mercy
Hey Strange, What a touching story. I've been enjoying my English class for the past week or so, and we've been learning some pretty cool stuff, so I kinda want ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Company
Hello Aley~ Here as requested! That ending... Wow. Very nice. Just one tiny grammatical thing: A thymectomy still require s surgeons to I feel like this poem is really powerful, ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Lucy's Cousin (title pending)
Hey TriSARAHtops, Here as requested. Your story is cute and, as everyone else has been saying, the if only line is very affective. However, your story is only narration which ...
Jan 26, 2014
