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Re: ?!
Hey Gaurav! Sorry for the long wait. Real life and stuff, you know? I'll be focusing on plot mainly since that's what you requested. Okay, your first part seems a ...
Apr 15, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Two
As long as I'm making you wait, 52 words are nothing. then Bara q had to go and whack That was odd, that moment of 'I-think-I-know-you'. Deja vu, he corrected ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter One
Hey Scarlett, I apologize for the wait. My life has been crazy recently. I'm here to at least get your first chapter reviewed, and your second chapter will be reviewed ...
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 3.05
I've been such a bad reviewer... The farther I get into my senior year, the less time management I seem to have. Anyways, hi~ Dang. This is beautiful. All of ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare
Hey~ Finishing you up! Take note that though I read the first draft/reviews of your first draft of your first chapter, I have not done so for your second chapter, ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Prey
So, you linked me to your old version, but there were sooo many reviews, and why would I review an old version if I can review the new one, so ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.4
It's been a long time. I'm sorry. I'll make a vague life excuse~ Anyways, here I am finally. I'm going to dive in. Parker had friends. He had an abundance ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Lover's Spit Left On Repeat
Hey Shadow~ So glad I get another of your poems. I'm sorry for the late response in the exchange, I just have kinda been swamped lately. You looked at me ...
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: What is it?
Hey~ Here for the poetry exchange. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get here. I've been kinda busy lately. You've had some pretty great reviewers, but I'll try ...
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: Dynamic
Hey there Magpie, I'm here for the poetry exchange deal. Sorry I got here so late. Life has just been really busy recently. You've had a lot of good reviews ...
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: Free
Hey Verser! Welcome to YWS~ Thought I'd pop in. Sometimes it's hard to get reviews on really short pieces like this. First, as much as I hate to disagree with ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: Coal Wrapped Dream
Hey Aley~ So glad to get one of your poems in the exchange. Okay, this is so powerful, I'm having trouble to know where to start. The ending, I guess ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: My Hero
Hey GreenTulip~ I'm one of your reviewers for the Poetry Exchange! What a touching poem. It's always nice to get some emotions out onto paper. I'm just going to jump ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: REMOVED...
Hey Gaurav, Dropping in since you requested (kind of) a review on your wall. I wanted to point out real quick since I noticed you've had a little frustration with ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: The Shadow's Work.
Hey Shadow! Here for the Poetry Exchange biz. :) Is it bad I don't get a grim feeling from this? I think it's rather uplifting really about a girl who ...
Feb 15, 2014
