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Re: life and all its random glory chapter 1
This is a great opening for a book! The only thing that I have to say about it is that you need to write more! you have properly enticed the ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: bullying
cheers bisquit! :D
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
it is very good and very chilling! most of your mistakes have been noted and i'm sure once you have edited it it will be very good! just keep at ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: The alien girl
yep i think most of your areas for improvement have been noted just watch it and don't worry too much about learning how to tense it correctly, it took me ...
Aug 31, 2008