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This is so beautifully written! You do really well with imagery and especially connecting it to emotions. I really feel the conflicting emotions, grief and relief as she reminisces on ...

Thank you for reading and commenting! It means a lot! I'll definitely keep some of this in mind when it comes time to reread everything!

Thank you for reading and commenting! I didn't notice the italics, I'll definitely fix that haha. The kid isn't actually adopted - it's hers by blood. Probably should have clarified ...