medievalwriter

Really like the 'ghost' analogy. I think it fits really well with the idea of sleep as well as the inability to obtain it. However, I feel that it could ...

Hey :) As soon as I say 'Moon' in the title I read it straight away :P I love the moon big style. Unfortunatrly I can't comment much on thing ...

Hey :D I said I'd review it so here I am...Finally doing it :P Overall, this was a good piece. The sections-although somewhat a bit short-were good and got your ...

Hey! Got to this through the random story button. It really is very useful :P First of all, I very much liked the medieval vibe; it's one of my favourite ...

Once again you haven't failed to produce a fine piece of writing. Well done! :D First of all I had a look about the origins of Chess for you since ...

Hello :D I'm Sean and I'm pleased to give this work the first review. :) First off, I thought this was an amazing piece of writing. I enjoyed the descriptions ...

Hey :) I'll be having a look at this piece today, so I'll just begin. First of all, the beginning made me giggle a bit. 'It was the Scottish Countryside. ...

Hey! :) I'll be having a quick look at your writing today. So I'll just begin. :) First thing I noticed was the spacing of this. It's something that needs ...

Hey! I'll be reviewing your writing today. It's fairly short so it's a good one to start review day with. :) Punctuation changes will be in red and in brackets ...

Hey, just stumbled upon this and, even though it's not what I would normally read, I still quite like it and find myself wanting to read more. So well done ...

Hey! Just had a quick skim through this and wanted to say that I liked it! :) I'll be posting a review of this soon, once I have a bit ...

Hey again. :) Since I liked the first chapter of this so much I rushed straight onto the next one :P So here goes. Chapter 2: Midsummer In the village ...

Hey Baywolf! :D I'll be looking at your story today, although I think that most things will have already been covered judging by the amount of reviews, so I'll just ...

Yeah! First review :P....chufters. Right I'll just get started then. A dull thud coming from the kitchen forced Eon awake. He looked at his clock, groaning as the time registered. ...

Hey again. This chapter definately keeps up the high quality that the first has, so well done. I see that most things have been picked up already so i'll be ...