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mdmitcha

  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Need to Breathe

    This was very well written! I was very entertained and intrigued throughout the whole story! It would be great if you gave the reader a little more to question. And ...

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Art » Literature, Realistic Re: strangers

    I really like how this short is realistic, not some cheesy story with an unbelievably fake moral. Although, a little bit more content would be nice. Are there other dilemmas ...

    Oct 5, 2013


The moral of Snow White is never eat apples.
— Lemony Snicket