mcleo1

Thank you for your edits. I liked the input you had, and sorry about the typo. I'll have to reread and check for them next time before posting.

Thanks I lot, I'm glad you like it. Yeah it's a bit rantish, can't have it being poetic or perfect.

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for it's length, I was trying to get it to be a good length and a bit realistic. Not ...

Thank you, I was trying to aim for that in a sense.