mcleo1

Hi, Nice to meet you :) Well first off, you are missing a lot of capitalization's through out this piece. I'm assuming you know about this though and probably chose ...

Well first off, I have to say this was interesting but I really really liked it. You seem to use the word "see" quite a bit in your piece actually. ...

This is a very interesting piece to say at the very least. Overall, I enjoyed it very much. I am not much into short stories, much less realistic fiction but ...

This is my first review, so bear with me. I won't criticize that much I promise. First off "As he rested in front of the house—out of the glow of ...