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Ok. I made this chapter 1 instead of 2 and now the old chapter 1 is the prologue.

I think this was really good. Apparently I can't tell you what to fix because th first person who commented said what was needed to be fixed. But I think ...

Merry Christmas to you too!

Naw not harsh at all. It's okay. I fixed some of it I guess. Thanks for the comments!

This was totally cute! lol gumdrops! I thought it was good! Very nice! The elves make such a big fuss over little things lol. Keep Writing!

First off, I think this was really good. 1) what is a shmabler? 2)maybe the Walking thing should have a cooler name.lol. Well that's it! I think you should keep ...

I thought this was awesome! And you did this during free time? Wow! I thought it was very good and interesting. Keep writing! :)

It was pretty good except I got lost because I had no clue as to what was going on.-_- But it was really good. Mysteryious

I loved it! It was awesome! It had a nice beat to it.

Wait, so I copy all of this and bring it to chapter 1 and delete chapter 2?

thanks Renn! Man! I was a feature work one second and th enext out. -_-

WOW!!!!!!! that was good! And I agree with BeckeeRenae. It would be a great song. But some really good music writer will have to put it together, because I'm not ...

thanks everyone for the likes!

to melcally, roal, and ladypurple: Thanks for the comments! to roal: About the MoonDoon village thing,hehe. Um, yeah, some of my friends thinks it's kind of XD so yeah. But ...

I loved it. Thought it was great. YOu were very descriptive and I was able to imagine everything. YOu seem to be good at rhyming which I'm not very good ...