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Thank you! I have a history of messing up my commas. :) This review was really helpful.

Thank you! I'll work on that.

I thought that this story was really good at explaining her emotions, and giving vivid imagery of the scene, and explaining how someone feels when someone takes something or someone ...

I thought this was really, really good. The words flowed, and it was clear that there was a lot of thought and emotion put into it. I thought that the ...

The storyline is very good, the description is very gory, but adds a lot to the story, and I liked it. You have sloppy punctuation in the beginning, and sometimes ...

I'm not really much of an expert with poetry, but I think that was really deep, and you gave very nice description that helped me picture everything.And by the way, ...

The owls were howling in the distant night sky. Owls don't howl, they hoot.