maryletsflyaway

Wow, this was really good. It has a super clear purpose and was written very creatively. You did a really good job of vocalizing what I think alot of people ...

This was good, but I almost felt like you should have been a little more sepcific. I especially like the last two lines, as I thought they were exceedingly clear. ...

I actually felt like this piece did flow really well. Your imagery was excellent and I feel like this was very well thought out. I understood everything that I felt ...

Sometimes I felt like your meter was off by a few beats, but other than that the content was superb and the meaning was conveyed clearly without overly expansive descriptions. ...

I really enjoyed this piece. I think its "than" rather than "then" in one of your lines towards the end. lol I thought your rythym was excellent and I felt ...

I like your ideas, but I don't think this poem allows them to come to fruition. It's rather confusing when you speak about the deaf hearing, the blind seeing, etc., ...

I think the way you word things makes this a little difficult to understand. I had trouble understanding what "a fester" was or what "The Finisher" was supposed to be ...