martinasxo

Thank you so much! I've actually made it up to chapter 18 so far, but I've decided not to post it on here anymore! lol I'm on mibba though, my ...

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and the last! :)

Loved it! I have to check out more of your work. I liked the way you described the taste as tasting like fish, brilliant! Also, I didn't really understand the ...

I was trying so hard not to make it obvious! :( Hopefully I get better at keeping things on the down low! Glad you're enjoying it. I am updating again ...

yes! I meant her train of thought when I wrote trans, should have clarified, sorry! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Thank you! In the past I would tend to jump to conclusions in the story about the characters, forgetting to keep in mind that I know my characters more than ...

I apologize about the past/present tense verbs I will definitely correct them! I tried putting as little detail in the story about the characters while also putting a lot, if ...