martinasxo

I loved your use of metaphors, particularly the section "Dawn was breaking and the sun bled its fiery hues into the sky as it rose like a majestic swan. You ...

I liked it because it was straight to the point, but there was hardly any detail in it. You kept stating that she was crying, and I would expect that, ...

I do not know much about art, so it flowed nicely for me because I didn't question whether it was greek or not. I did question what time period it ...

I really like the character development for the character Adelise. She is the type of character that I quickly draw my attention to in stories, as I myself enjoy the ...

Usually I only read the horror genre once in a blue moon because I have to really be up for it, but I really enjoyed this short. Like others have ...