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mariannne

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Toujours Nuit~1400 words

    pretty much anything that i could think to say was said about critical elements, but from just a readers standpoint, i like the plot idea, mainly because i love france ...

    Nov 22, 2006
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Do you love me?

    i really like this idea, it reminds me of the typical preteen experience. grammar is the only thing i would suggest, but i love it!

    Nov 22, 2006


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