mangawolf

I liked the "is it?" line. I thought it shook things up a bit; I could hear a desperate and angry voice getting higher. But that's just me. I guess ...

Hi, this was very nice. It really gave a sense of what the average teenager is living for, just living for the moment and getting what they can out of ...

Whoa, nice! Could be a song! In fact, it reminds me of a song by Royksopp, the rhythm does... I bet you could sing this to "Only This Moment" by ...

So sad, I understand the feeling. My only problem is, it doesn't seem like a poem to me, in the format it's in. Just a poetically written paragraph. But it ...