maishaywca

Thank you very much for the review. I try to make it right!

Thank you very much! Oh I did o lot of printing mistakes! Thank you very much for pointing out!

Ow...ok I will check that out!

Thanks for your review. I am trying to write a few lines about the place. Zayn and zainie are the same person.

Thanks for your review. I will be really glad to take help from you. You know I don't write English novels. So, it's so difficult for me to stick to ...

Oh! Thank you very much for your review. It was a nice piece of advice. I will keep all that in mind. Thanks again.

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Thank you for the review. When I wrote the chapter, it also occurred to me that the chapter is too short. However, I still working on it. I will try ...

@Nobunaga

Hey, I have made some changes. Hope it's good.

Hey, I have made some changes. Hope it's good.

Thank you very much! I really need that kind of help... This is my first English novel. So, you can understand it's very difficult for me to express everything correctly. ...

Oh! Thank you very much. Actually, this is my first novel in English. So, there are many mistakes. Thanks for telling me. I will add the things you advised. Thanks ...

Hehe... my mistake!

ok.