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Re: A Walk in the Zoo, Year 2200
This is really an intriguing poem. "We like the things we make ourselves," is a very powerful statement. Even in that age where animals no longer exist as living creatures, ...
Dec 11, 2012 -
Re: A Numerical Story
Oh, how I love a poem with a message. I say this would be a great poem to offer a child (or adult) having trouble with really any problems in ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: Residue
I've an affinity for material dealing with memory. Other than a few comma splices, it paints a vivid picture. The end of the first paragraph: "There! I can smell you ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: Tip me over and pour me out
To start off: 1.3-5 Ugh -- love it. I still fight this every day, wondering how I can still be questioning this so often in my life. 4.1-2 From a ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: My Little Invalid
Afternoon, Neva. "and how many have given [...] How many?" I feel this really intensifies how the reader may place themselves in the mindset of the victim. I'm unsure of ...
Dec 10, 2012
