lyrical_sunshine

I've read Tom Sawyer, which was hilarious, and we're reading Huck Finn right now. I understand why you'd think he was racist, but at the time I'm sure Twain would ...

uhh... I'm confused. But maybe I'm supposed to be confused. I don't know. Firstly, I would like more information on Matilda. Just a little bit more, because I get the ...

I liked it, but I agree with everyone wasn't exactly fiction. It sounds kind of like one of those forwards you email to all your friends lol. But it was ...

hey, that was totally cool. your sense of humor is great lol. and i loved the irony of finding God while reading the Goldent Compass. "Phillip Pullman would be ashamed." ...

I liked the bluntness too. However, I think you should have...lead up to Tom's exile a little more. Rather than him just immediately being kicked out, you know? Maybe a ...

I think the beginning was a little odd too. I like one-word beginnings, but that didn't really work. I really liked the ending though, actually. I am rather confused (I ...

Description description description! That's my advice to almost every young writer. Although, you did a pretty good job with that. So I'll agree with rimewind and say - give us ...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE To Kill a Mockingbird. I finished reading it about two weeks before it was due for my literature class. It is amazing. The dialogue ...

*sigh* I always get here after everyone else has given deep, detailed reviews... oh well. This was great. I see so many fanfics dealing with Harry and Ginny, Harry and ...

Kepe was probably right, but it was still excellent description. Just one error I saw: "Well now she knows she was wrong." "Well" needs a comma after it. :D Is ...

humph. I hate how Bella has no life outside of Edward. I mean, okay, I have a boyfriend whom I love very, very much. I wear a promise ring on ...

i saw it as a writing activity. i thought it looked fun. *shrug* so i'm going to try it! :D i am: myself i wonder: when I will get it ...

awesomeness!!! that's all i hreally have to say, considering i'm lousy at critiquing poetry. i really enjoyed it though. it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. :D

is this supposed to be a spoof of of the song by Rihanna? edit: lol, never mind. i guess you have to read the whole post, huh. i liked this, ...

No, not as bad. The first chapter seemed more rushed to me. I actually thought the development of the characters went a lot better in this one. :D keep it ...