lyrical_sunshine

There's some really beautiful imagery in this poem - such a sense of hope. :) I particularly love your first two stanzas. I am a little confused about the meaning ...

Wow, this is really, really beautiful. I love the imagery you've created - "waves strum in against the shore" and "leaves shrugging off the cold midnight dew." Awesome job. The ...

Hi there! You have some beautiful imagery here, and I love that; the problem I'm seeing is that I don't know exactly what you're trying to say. In a way ...

This was absolutely gorgeous. I have next to no criticism, except for this line, "(one day, when the sun subsides and the clouds are lit/ with a gold, absent of ...

Your writing her is great great GREAT, but like everyone else said - it was confusing. Kind of irritating. Because it's not just a piece of writing, it needs to ...

I love this analogy! So sweet and well thought out. I stumbled over this phrase a little: "Who doesn’t mind waiting that bit long to untie me." Did you mean, ...

This is some seriously beautiful writing. You've done a great, great job with her character - because I know she's a teenager, and even at certain places she talks like ...

" What do you " What do you see , when you close your eyes ? Are you with me , [s]whatching[/s] (watching) the sunrise . What do you hear ...

Wow! There is some beautiful awesome imagery here! Great job! I think this is probably my favorite line: The walls packed by ice and tended by Men (is there a ...

Hey there! I really like where you're going with this; the rhythm and the cadence of the first couple lines was awesome. I could literally HEAR it, and I love ...

Okay, I really liked this - your imagery and word choice was absolutely gorgeous. However, I'm still not quite sure what this poem is ABOUT. I sense there's some tragedy ...

I love these books so much. I bought City of Glass on the day it came out, and it didn't disappoint. :) I still think I liked the first too ...

Wow, this was so creepy and cool. I loved the voice of the little girl - and I also loved that it felt not quite right, you know? Like she ...

The first sentence was long and kind of a run-on - if you could split that into two sentences, it would be better. Okay, now onto my real reviews. :) ...

Kylan Really beautiful structure here. I loved that nothing was capitalized - I'm not sure why, but I think it just gave an extra feeling of chaos and confusion. I'm ...