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Re: Love and Bubblegum.
Bubblegum!! Haha I love it. I'd never compared love with bubblegum before; that's very creative. Whatever you go through, to matter the problem, you will always be together. Always. Did ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: break up
Great poem! I love the intense emotion that so many of us can relate to. You need to add some commas and periods to make the distinctions between each thought. ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: To an Unloved Rose.
Wow I absolutely love this poem. It is short, but it works. I love the imagery and word choices. Your rhymes came so naturally and beautifully. Despair you not: for ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: The Rarely Beautiful End
Great poem! As a Christian myself, I find it refreshing to see something written about God to glorify Him. When the world comes to an end it won't be as ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Love Ain't Easy Mac
Great story! I love your easy mac motif. It's really cute. :D When he grinned at me, it was like you put my heart in the microwave and put the ...
Oct 6, 2008