lumhan

Hello, StormAroundMe, Lümhan here for a quick sneek-peek. First of all, I quite like your poem. It's simple. I have a doubt though; who is 'he?' If it's being referred ...

Thank you DarshayataDeka! I'm thinking of adding few more lines to it.

Thank you DarshayataDeka! I'm thinking of adding few more lines to it.

I'll be careful with the punctuations next time. Thank you! There might be a sequel..

Please don't be sorry. I appreciate the honesty! I've made up my mind to continue it with more details. Thankyou!

I agree that it's rather a short one. It's my first and the reviews that I have received are much needed for my improvement. Thank you! I'll work on this ...

I wrote this a day after I came across the Stranger so there's not much of details. But now that he's here to stay the poem might continue. Thank you! ...

Machupicchu, thank you from the deepest core of my heart. Every individual will look at it with different perspective. The stranger will remain a Stranger!

Thank you Nikayla for the review. I termed it as a fantasy as it is all a result of my dream and I rather referred the person as Stranger as ...

Thank you Nikayla for the review. I termed it as a fantasy as it is all a result of my dream and I rather referred the person as Stranger as ...

Honestly, I'm with you on how it ended. It's a gunshot ending! Now that the Stranger is here to stay, the poem will be continued.

This is exactly what I am feeling. I loved it! I really liked "..will you hold me like you used to?" Keep going.

It might sound really funny and even stupid but I once had a dream. I dreamt of this guy who held me with so much love. I continually dreamt this ...

I quite liked it,especially how it concluded "..repeats itself. " Best wishes.

I am a born again Christian, and trust me life has never been the same ever again. God works in wonderful ways. I know what loneliness is.. Jesus comforted me!