lucyy

I'm back for the promised review, just one day earlier :wink: So .. here goes ... (: Can You Handle It? ; This confuses me slightly, Is this still part ...

Thank you all for reading this & I totally agree with you all it's way too rushed & needs more emotions!! But I'm glad you have all read this & ...

Having just got back from holiday I'm so overwhelmed at all the comments I've got & I can't thank you all enough for reading my story & critiquing it to ...

Daytripper -- Thank you so much for your help, I will alter those mistakes straightaway (: & thank you so much, I'm so glad you like the story already :D ...

Thank you, I'm going to edit those mistakes today & I'll add in a bit more scenery & descriptions. Thank you all for your tips & for reading this!! Lucyy ...

Thank you all for your tips & comments. I'm so glad you all liked it & want to read more!! hehe ... unbeleivable (: & thank you daytripper for all ...

Thank you all for reading my chapter & I'm glad you liked it :D & lol sorry about the length, I sometimes get a bit carried away (: & thankyou ...

Thank you kiley & i'll PM you when I post the the next chapter, I'm glad you're so intersted .. I seriously can't believe people are reading my stuff hehe ...

Thank you both Merry_Haven & olivia1987uk I'm so pleased you like it & yep I will get on those alterations as soon as, I still haven't done the other ones ...

Thanks complicated 101, I'm glad you enjoyed it & i'll tidy up the bits that you pointed out & no worries about the lateness, because I'm a little late in ...

Thank you both for your comments & critique, i will take it all on board & start to edit it to improve it!! Also, there's a prologue to this story ...

Really enjoying this story & it's getting more like a page-turner as you go on!! I've got a few pointers for you in this document & I hope it will ...

Having read your prologue I really enjoyed it & am off to read the next chapter. I've enclosed a document on what I think you could improve on. Hope it ...

Thank you both & i will take on board what you've both said & get to editing it right away!! & lol that's a very good point the both of ...