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Oooh, I'm liking the direction this is going in ... can't wait for more!! Although, I am sad that she's made the decision to not be with Isaac :( I ...

Just to let you know I will read & review this, but yet again I'm on a flying visit, so I will hopefully be able to soon (: & I ...

Heyy daytripper -- I thought it was about time I read & reviewed some of your work as you've (very kindly) reviewed alot of mine (: & I saw this ...

I like this poem, again, as I said I'm not a poetry person & I avoid the forums so this won't be a very helpful critique, but anwayss ... I ...

Wow this sounds really good (: I'm not all that good with poetry, but I still like reading it (I just can't wite it!! :lol: ) But this was reallyyy ...

Wow. Again, there is nothing more that can be said, your writing style is totally breathtaking & I'm as addicted to this story as I was to the Twilight series ...

Only a few small alterations I have spotted: “Because you 're the only child, Sophia, “Because your the only child, Sophia, your father is leaving his fortune with you. Except ...

This was short & sweet (: I think the length was just right & I already like the sound of this :D To my critiquing: The night outside was full ...

I have now finished reading all twelve chapters :shock: & I have to say I'm glad I devoured them all in one day :D You're writing is just so totally ...

Oooh, I love how you've added more to the story so it isn't just focusing on Isaac and Sophia. Looking forward to find out what happens with The Coven problem ...

That chapter has left me totally breathless .. such raw emotions!! I seriously can't stop reading this ... I'm off to the next chapter. I've never read so much on ...

Wow another great chapter :D & I love the whole "Blood Mate"/"Uniter" thing, so cool & good names as well. I love how you're not rushing into Isaac & Sophia's ...

As I didn't leave a comment on chp 3, I thought I would leave one here, but there's nothing much I can say that I haven't said on the other ...

Wow I'm really enjoying this (I seem to be using these words alot!) I am seriously transfixed, I can't dstop reading the chapters!! You have a page-turner of a story ...

Wow I really like this :D it feels like I'm reading a book that's already been published! & I think that this is unique to Twilight & I'm really loving ...