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Wow! This is an extra bonus :D . You did not tell me this was here though, missy *looks stern* =P. I'm glad to see you're back writing, and I ...

Hi there! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here!! =D Okay, my name is Lucy and I have decided to be your reviewer for today (: ...

Well hi there, I have decided to review this wonderful piece of work of yours!! :D First off I'm going to quote the whole piece and go through it making ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS :D! My name's lucyy and I've decided to be your reviewer for today :D. I hope this review will help you out and if ...

Wow, twenty-one chapters, you’re really sailing through this, eh? :D All I can say is keep them coming :wink: !! Now on with the review... Three others I didn’t. Maybe ...

I was so pleased to see you had another chapter up, so I'm going to cut the post-chat short, and plough straight into the review... (: How could he be ...

Hi there, I have decided to be your reviewer for today :D. I noticed that this was your fourth chapter, so I may ask some stupid questions. if I do, ...

Last Minute Views What you can do to improve: -Add in more thoughts and, especially, feelings. As a reader I’m following this journey of your MC so I want to ...

Hi there, Max; I have decided to be your reviewer for today!! =D So, first off, I will go through your whole piece making [comments/suggestions] and edits or extra adding-ins ...

If I told Michael, it would send the whole coven into an uproar. Expand a little on that: why would it turn the whole coven into an uproar? How are ...

Well hi, Pixie!! You are a part of my celebration of freedom (thank you for the dancing elephant by the way :wink:) as I'm celebrating by catching up on my ...

Hiya, Hannah I am so sorry it took me this long to get to reviewing this. I’ve just come back from my last *yayy* exam and I thought I’d celebrate ...

Well Ash, I'm so pumped to read this!! I'm so excited about the revelation of Isaac... *eek* ... :D CHAPTER EIGHTEEN I was deep within the maze-like forest before I ...

Yayy!! Another chapter!! You do know how to make my day, Ash :wink:. And I get the first review! Wohoo!! (: Anyway, let's get this review rolling... (: Okay, this ...

Hello there :D. Okay, the other day I stumbled across your story looking lonely with no reviews, so I copied it into a word document and have just finished the ...