lucaMajica

Hi :) I'm glad you liked my poem. About the fourth stanza, I was trying to make it different, but maybe I should have done it some other way. Anyway, ...

tnq for the corrections :))

tnq klara, I thought you may like it :)) "It happens, it's fine." thank you for the consolation ;))

tnx for everything :)

Hi! :) I'm glad you liked my poem and if you do write a short story, please let me know :) Thank you for the review I appreciate that :)

I like it very much, especially the quotes you picked and how your story developed, I'll be more curious about your work from now on :))