lsilvernail

Wow, I really enjoyed this! I have a fascination with all things Japanese, so your story caught my eye. I see very little that I myself would correct. I know ...

Wow, good job! You obviously have a sense of humour. I liked the interesting twist at the end. Funny story! Now allow me to dismember it. You need to pick ...

First of all, I'd just like to say: Wow! This is a great piece of writing! It was amazingly descriptive and visual. Not only that, but the philosophies you portray ...

This is a good piece of writing. It was very visual; I liked all of the imagery! There were, of course, just some minor grammatical errors, but those are easily ...