lozzen

don't worry it is a fantasy story i will get round to posting the rest hopefully (when it's written) lol!

yeh after i read your comment i realised that and changed it i hope it is clearer now! (no the a was a mistake)

Thank you so much that was really helpful! I know the rhyming was a little forced but i didn't really know what to put next (which doesn't sound too good ...

Wow i really like that the rhyme is good and the words are well chosen. I also like how you've kept it simple, it's a very well written poem! keep ...