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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: She had asthma

    This is such an amazing poem. I personally know quite a few people with asthma and i've been there when they've had asthma attacks. It's so scary, but this poem ...

    Jun 22, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Broken from Love

    i love this poem, especially because it rhymes but not in an obvious way, it think it flows really naturally and gives a good effect. This is a really beautiful ...

    Jun 22, 2014


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge