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this snipit has been incorperated into my larger story, its in fantasy fiction called luannas story so far, go cheek it out, im looking for reviews!!! x

Thanks for all the feed back Kaylyn JabberHut and Esmeits really appricated. i think this needs a full re write so hopfully when ever i get time i can improve ...

Short epilogue enjoy the increasing passages of overtly descriptive prose dialogue and action --------------------------------- Preface All natural colours bleed into grey with the on coming of night.