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I figured that this story would kinda sound like another book or movie. When I write, I take tiny bits from other books, movies, or games I have played. I ...

Sorry about the numbers and misspelled beginning. Don't worry, you'll get detail on Ella Rose soon enough. I just thought you needed to know the beginning on what had happen. ...

I like how you are continuing with the argument. I didn't know she could hurl fireballs. In the first chapter you said she isn't much of a fighter but you ...

Thanks for telling me that! Now I know I can shorten it like that for future preferences.

My grammar isn't very good sometimes. You have to excuse the "and me". I always mess that part up. I know I messed up the spelling for 'beginning'. I don't ...

I think that this will turn out to be a very exciting read. Your details made it much more easier to imagine. Are we going to see the female vampire ...

Just like the first chapter, I found this humorous and different. I'll be waiting for you to write more.

This is absolutely different than what people usually write. People don't usually post their arguments with their characters. They would simply be too embarrassed. I found this chapter humorous and ...